
“The Lonely Painting” by Jude Griebel
how to live in a world
no longer your own
where your values
are trashed and your
ethics are gnashed in
the merciless jaws of
effete intellectual
solipsists aiming for
ignorant progress
deluded new dogmas
commissioned intolerance
framing ad hominem
scathing indictments
of any and all
disagreement
how to live in a world
you no longer love
truth be told but
it cannot be done
no choice left but to
turn yourself inward
pursuing the strength
of conviction to foment
a new hearts-and-minds
revolution a strategy
seeking to freshen the
air to enlighten the
dark modern motive
with new suasion of
old timeless truths
From my book Ephemera
A comprehensive critique on present realities. A Great write!!
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many thanks
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A noble imperative here . . .
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Reblogged this on Word Play … Poetry in Progress and commented:
Objective reality
Here’s to view that’s retrospective
Without subjective directive
No more obfuscation
Or Alienation
Lacking customer perspective
Alan Grace
1 June 2018
Daily prompt: Retrospective
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thank you for sharing my poem wit your readers
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AWESOME!!! the words, the ideas and heart in this poem. Such depth and truth for our lives today. Thank you for liking my poem – i feel so grateful and happy i could come and visit here! Your words are so powerful. Thank you! 🙂
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thank you for your kind words
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Unfortunately, this is the relflected truth. Wise words! 👏❤️
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much appreciated
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very interesting. sometimes w my poetry i feel instinctively like breaking a line, but many times the lines don’t logically follow one another and instead are connected through vague associates, so i feel like your poem set a good example of how to keep things flowing from line to line
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