promises were made
inducements assured
or he wouldn’t have died
let his sacrificed soul
slip so easily into that
charred scaly pouch
so much for the contract
of blood by Theophilus
what the hell has this
damned old world come to
when you can’t even trust
in a deal with the devil
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“I am in no mood to be deceived any longer by the crafty devil and false character whose greatest pleasure is to take advantage of everyone.” – Camille Claudel
From my book Onionskin
Too true. The Devil has ever been a liar and the father of lies and yet there are those who would still trust him more than the God who died to assure us of his faithfulness.
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amen
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That’s a hell of a note on which to end the year!
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the devil you say…
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Those last two lines! Astounding. Forgive me for hearing “Devil Went Down to Georgia” as I read this through the second time.
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glad you enjoyed it – I’m a Charlie Daniels fan
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Wow astonishing I loved it
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I sincerely appreciate that
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what a Faustian poem! I like that you released it along with the new year when all of us are making our traditional New Years deals with the devil (aka New Years resolutions). I also like the choice of alliteration rather than rhyme. It gives this poem an old timey feel that goes so well with stories of making deals with the devil.
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thanks kindly – you made my day
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I am not entirely sure why yet Peter Gabriel’s wonderful lyric Salisbury Hill came to mind upon reading this immaculate, to the point poem…funny old world we live in.
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don’t know the song but I’ll check the lyrics – after rereading my piece, I must admit I’m not completely happy with it – I may have to rewrite this attempt at sarcasm
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I agree with previous commenters–Excellent. Only one outcome when dealing with the devil, and it ain’t ever good.
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much appreciated
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I enjoyed this very much! You have great skill!
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I appreciate that very much
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