place my bier on a plinth
aromatic combustible
settle me into transformative
grasp of historical fire
allow me a passage sublime
unto cinders and smoke
all the best worst and last
of me carried aloft by the
winds of a dissipate memory
recondite ritual somber
and sad not for me but for
those who preceded me
apt intellectual ancestors
models and mentors who
lent me their minds and their
mettle accepting me into
their philosophe clan
even knowing that I had
ideas of my own faithful
principles rooted but
not grown in clone of
enlightenment canons
alas I have died soon away
from this world the last
unblooded heir to a
diligent rational rigor and thus
has my tribe gone extinct
love this piece!
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I appreciate that very much
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Beautiful writing, not to be merely read, more savoured. Oddly (perhaps) I hear a Norseman Chieftain when reading your words Paul
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those viking funerals were indeed something to behold
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No doubt you live on in the hearts/minds who have been so powerfully moved by your verse . . . Old poets never die, they just enter their poetry and become a part of their own metaphors . . .
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even your comments are exquisite poetry
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Still reading and re-reading aloud. Nice to be taken and gripped by a piece.
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I’m flattered by your comment
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You have a very special gift with words. Thank you.
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I sincerely appreciate your kind words
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So vivid, so sad, so true. This reminds me of the war veterans who grace D-Day celebrations. Hearing those old gents speak of their experiences and knowing that a generation nears its end causes me grief. All the more reason that memories be recorded for future generations to learn from. The wisdom of ages should not be forgotten. We lose something vital when we cease to listen or respect the elders. This is beautiful, Paul.
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it’s difficult to experience the passing of a growing number of contemporaries
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