28 comments on “Transmutation

  1. Yup! I just started an “anti-depression” pill under the guise that it will help me sleep and accept those thing! Fine! Then it said 1-4 weeks before it kicks in… shit the bridge is only 10 minutes away : )

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  2. weary and wasted

    the hands and legs

    given to ghosts

    abled only by sleep

    These words produce such a powerful image and set the tone for the rest of your poem. It feels as though it is about the gradual disabling and loss of a body rather than about age but maybe I’ve misunderstood. Apologies if I have. It is a poignant read.

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