spring hired some heralds
to trumpet her entrance
they blow sheets of rain
slightly warmer than air
shrinking winter its layers
begin slow recession from
ridges of rooflines this north
country village refreshed by
its season of slumber yawns
into familiar warm welcome
of sun on its newly awakened
square footage of skin high
above banks and drifts just
beginning to melt in first
barely perceptible trickles
that soon will grow charging
and roaring through rivers
and streams of this countrified
landscape that took me
accepted me folded me in
as if one of its own without
prejudice held against where
I was born or my city-bred face
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refreshing !!
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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Wow–tremendous, truly.
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thanks dearly, alba
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Most welcome.
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I really really like this one–great description, and then the poignant ending.
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we are all immigrants, winding up someplace other than where we started
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You’re so right, Paul–and it’s kind of a nice idea, as I ponder it.
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Perfect
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much appreciated
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No matter how long we may have lived in the concrete jungle the countryside remains somewhere in our blood and calls us continually home.
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it surely did for me
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The city soul escapes concrete for forest – songwriters throughout time have tried to make a lyric work in this regard. Joni I believe got closest. Notwithstanding the reflective nature of this poem outdoes the lot. Brilliant.
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you’re a kind chap, mike
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I cannot live too long in between a concrete-jungle. I must go up to the hills of forest or the mountains where the river flow. Nature is ours to hold and from nature is where lessons of Life started … 🙂
Excellent poem!
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thanks – I wholeheartedly agree
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Brings back rich memories of when winters were winters here on the west coast; now we just move from a late fall into an early spring! Didn’t snow once this year! Global Warming for sure . . .
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meanwhile, we’re just shy of 8 feet so far here
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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Most Welcome!
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Lovely imagery. It’s also captivating like a beautiful painting with the spoken word.
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you are very kind
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Awed. Just awed.
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deeply appreciate that
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‘Spring hired some heralds’. What an exceptional opening line. And then what follows – a vision in words. Just beautiful, Paul. And, despite your 7+ feet of snow, I can hear the drips from here. It sounds like a glorious place to be in the splendour of all its seasons. Thank you for a wonderful glimpse.
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so glad I could help you “see” it – I also remember fondly the spectacular views of your Edinburgh
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