like a stone
half as big
as a house
hate has mass
heavy held
in its place
weighting
body and soul
painful anchor
preventing
all progress
a life crushed
beneath its own
bitterness
never to feel
the sweet
freedom of
walking in
spry lightfoot
tolerance
finding new
joys of discovery
gleaning from
different opinions
and viewpoints
an ever more
complex complete
understanding
of man in
his teeming
diversity
Beautifully written….Poignant!
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I sincerely appreciate your kind words
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Superb as ever. The hate begets desire for revenge an occasional curse in most on occasion yet indefensible though…food for thought is this poem.
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I grew up being taught to “hate the sin, not the sinner” but I’m not sure I learned the lesson well
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May we rid the world
of the meaning an use
of the word “hate!”
chris
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if only
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Beautiful
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thanks kindly
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Seems to me ‘hate’ is a room in our psychological house we choose to enter; or not . . . It’s best antidote is mercy . . .
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once entered, it can be difficult to exit
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Amazing poetry.
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so glad that you thought so
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“Spry lightfoot tolerance”. If only people would be open to letting go of hate and test new waters.
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if only I could
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Paul, I appreciate your honest words.
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Paul, I always marvel at not only your words but their progression line by line. “finding new joys of discovery gleaning…” so nice.
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I sincerely appreciate your kind words, don
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