the old man
the only man
willing to hear them
the voices of time
the paper white birch
utters softly
a whispered lament
for the handsome
crisp skin
given freely
to history’s hands
the towering pine
sighs in its tops
for dropped
embryo needles
that fall upon ground
it can hardly
remember
the stout wrinkled maple
gives whimper
a plaintive dry cry
for the once virile
sugar sap
taken by too many
seasons of harvest
the ancient bull oak
gnarled and knotted
groans deeply
in pain
under strain
from the heavyset
ache of its age
the old man
the only man
versed in the language
of voices of time
Awesome verse Paul. Loved this.
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much appreciated, yassy
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This is a rather special poem, Paul. The enchanted forest of life at odds with Old Father Time himself. Stand up and applaud moment is due.
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you do me great honor, mike – thank you
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Poignant. i want to give this oak an embrace.
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old trees love to be hugged
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I love both the image you’ve chosen and the verses you’ve written: each voice whispering in it’s own way the schadenfreude of time – past, present, future . . . You are such a gifted poet!
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you’re very kind, my friend – thank you
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That images compliments the wonderful prose to perfection.
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it was a fortunate find
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But not all goes to waste. Listen, too, for those voices calling for hope for their future. Their whispers can be heard, as well, amongst those of pain.
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I do try, but they seem to grow dimmer with time
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Fantastic poetry!
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many thanks
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Beautiful art and wonderful poem
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thank you most kindly
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Can’t focus on poetry too well right this moment though I try. Really cool painting choice though. Its been years since i painted.
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it’s never too late, as they say
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Absolutely wonderful depiction of the strength and wisdom of aging done well.
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I sincerely appreciate your thoughtful comment
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Reblogged this on Jerri Perri.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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OK Paul, it’s always good to share a good thing with others!
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Sad, beautiful homages that do justice to the realities of history and to lives well-lived. Including your own. Thank you, Paul.
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many thanks for your kind words
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You’re welcome.
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embryo needles and the ancient bull oak. i’m there among their trunks.
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I’ll be sure to listen for you
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I love the textures in the picture that replicate the changes in the old man. Bravo for the wisdom in the old man’s language.
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I was pleased to find the perfect complementary image
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This is wonderful, Paul. (I’m a tree hugger from way back.) The voices of these aging trees are eloquent and poignant. And I can relate in my “old age” (70) to their lament.
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having spent most of my life in the concrete jungle, rural retirement has been all the sweeter for my trees
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I hear you, about trees! 🙂 There is something healing about walking among them, or even just looking out the window at their branches, leaves.
Here’s one of my tree poems you might not have seen: https://raindancepoetry.wordpress.com/2017/04/01/seasonings/
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it’s a wonderful piece – fav lines are “wrinkling hours into bark” and “flavoring earth with the future”
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