
“Addiction” by Howard Lancaster
neurochemistry
twisted and kinked
ropes of darkness
hang brains from
powdercoat gallows
transmuting the
psyche disabling the
organs of dreams
choking choice
freely burning all
natural identity
down to black ash
here the predator
heat of ferocious
scaled cravings turns
tissues to sopping
with alien moisture
the sweat from a
grim peristalsis
biology bent to
enslavement of
merciless purpose
destruction not
damage sheer
utter destruction
its ruin apparent
just look in the eyes
vacant pods sunken
sallow and sightless
all trace of a man
hidden fetal and deep
cowered under dead
layers of life from
the past wrapped
in skin of what
once was a womb
From my book Small Noise
I am not sure about this one – peristalsis biology – sounds painful. Maybe this is your protest…
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a weakness of my aversion to punctuation – consider a period between those 2 words
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Your words have meaning. Keep making an impact. Would love your feedback buddy, hope to see you return to my blog one day
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much appreciated
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The cause and the net result defined. A poem of stark power. Superb. I had the Bert Jansch song, ‘Needle of Death’ playing as I read this. A strange coincidence, yet the song and your poem worked well together.
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I’d say that was eerie…
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Reblogged this on Word Play … Poetry in Progress and commented:
Addiction is uncompromising in its hold on you 😦
Daily prompt: Uncompromising
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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I think I remember this one…for its strikingly startlingly fine description. So well done.
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much appreciated
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Most welcome.
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Started writing about addiction
Hope you like it.😃
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thanks for the information
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