①
land and sea
warm and cool
in their time
in their place
without me
or with me
no matter
my powers
have paltry
affect upon
cycles writ
deep in the
arcane language
of chaos
on scrolls
of creation
②
I huff and I puff
paper boats
on a pond
destinations
a function
of entropy
③
diathermy escapes
greenhouse
boundaries
trading forces
with quantum
realms seeking
equations of state
casting changes
of temperature
pressure and
motion with
palpably human
intellectual
volume in short
discreet manifest
brain-sized
understanding
From my book Pieces of Wine
Yep – in the scheme of things we’re little more than nothing…
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ah, but there’ so much to that “little more”
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The construct of this poem is perfection. It is a great shame that mankind does not see that perfection should never be tampered with; it should be left to its own devices to vary its condition as pure nature would have it do. Super work, Paul.
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arrogance is man’s nature – and will cause his end
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You summed up today’s society, our “kind/species” so perfectly. The entire verse(s) filled with so many words, through so little words. The end, the perfect ending “intellectual
volume in short, discreet manifest, brain-sized, understanding.” If only all could see through your eyes, which see through your intellect and most genuinely, your heart.
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thank you from the bottom of my heart – your generous comments touch me
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Your intellect, imagination and heart … your talent and gifts, have touched me since the time I came across the very first post of yours I read, many years ago now. You inspire me Paul, you take me away to far away places, that often, places that are just right here. So I thank you, and from the bottom of my heart. Never stop writing, never stop sharing, never stop being you.
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oh, Kimberly – I will cherish this comment always – you have touched me deeply
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That has touched me deeply. Double blessing.
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A great piece. Such a pity some others will not understand it to appreciate the quality.
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thanks kindly
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Somehow there is a beauty in the processes that we can perceive without understanding. Even paper boats take us somewhere.
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oh yes – the beauty of science is in how it reveals God’s handiwork
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