ungainly hands chopping beards
severed heads by mistake
filling baskets with accidents
stumbling on underground markets
with buyers for evident crimes
thus did a new business model
emerge from the wielding of razors
aggressively drawn straight across
ill-placed trust in those ungainly hands
of a new minted ultimate barber
you paint your picture well
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thank you for reading and commenting
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Your words are magic as always
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thanks, Barb
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I hesitate every time I decide to ‘comment’ on your poems, primarily because I feel that the feelings your works evoke in my mind are way too sublime and transcendental to be successfully captured in everyday phrases.You inspire words to become inspirations for imaginations rarely sought. Thank you for gifting us beautiful poetry daily.
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oh my – your comment moves me – thank you from my heart – please don’t ever hesitate to comment
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Paul, stunning poem….
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thank you so much, john
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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Love this one!
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thanks kindly
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Well that’s me off to town to pick up an electric one! Great stuff.
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ha ha – cut carefully
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Imagery is just PERFECT! love it
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much appreciated
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