
“Identity Crisis” by Thomas C. Fedro
(Originally posted June 2013)
am I who I see
in the mirror
or in the sheen
of your eyes
am I who I hear
in my breathing
or in the beats
of your heart
perhaps I am
all of them
but what if
I am none
Gorgeous, as always
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thank you kindly
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Or more?
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I like that thought
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Aah! That scary Question. What if…
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the eternal question
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very true
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Identity to me, speaks of doubt…of a new love that has not yet felt a solid foundation or an old love that is questioning it survival. This poem a creation of either the poet’s soul or the poet’s imagination, it has no stumbling blocks, it flows. AJM
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thank you for such a wonderful comment
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delightfully profound…you…the poet!
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oh, my, I am speechless
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All of the above or none of the above…makes one take pause.
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I think I know myself quite well – but there are always moments…
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Reblogged this on Eclectic Verbosity.
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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I wish I could have written this as – and I suspect most readers will – I can identify with it. Shame I can’t though. Wonderful piece.
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it seems a universal inquiry
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Reblogged this on Swooning Maruca and commented:
Love this poem.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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Paul that is beautiful
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appreciate that
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fabulous. I really love this.
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greatly appreciated
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Always pondering
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the down side of sentience
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A poet’s life
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Wonderful poetry.
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your kindness never gets old
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Blessings to you.
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Depending on whose eyes, I’d prefer to think all of them.
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my preference, too
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