drumskin resonance
snared by the brush-beats
that syncopate passion
two hearts in their swoon
hand in hand for the
dance of all dances
bliss rising and falling
to rhythms of
generous urgency
teaching two lives
given truth of their troth
how a love can endure
in the keep to one tempo
Beautiful word play
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many thanks
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Very Cool!
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thanks kindly
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Magickally entwined words!
chris
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much appreciated, chris
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Welcomed kindedly!
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An entire tome in just a few words…magician at work.
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many thanks, mike
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This Poem is of major significance to Me.
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I hope it was of good significance
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Yes.
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Love it! What a fine Romantic you are . . .
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and you, sir, are a gentleman
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I must share this Paul! Beautiful.
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many thanks, my friend
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Reblogged this on lasting impressions editing and commented:
Friends, please take good long moments to discover and browse on the literary side through Paul F. Lenzi, a truly gifted poet whose writings have moved me and taken me to faraway places previously unexplored. Marvelous images, emotions and deeply personal engagement.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers – moreso, for your most generous comments – I am deeply touched
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