(originally posted June 2013)
thunder stumbles in the dark
bumping about the night stage
lagging its lightning quick
flashes of sight
I enjoy the atmospheric comedy
until it hits home that my feet
are also too slow and clumsy
for my eyes
(originally posted June 2013)
thunder stumbles in the dark
bumping about the night stage
lagging its lightning quick
flashes of sight
I enjoy the atmospheric comedy
until it hits home that my feet
are also too slow and clumsy
for my eyes
Writer Lynne Sargent
Poetry Puttering by Pax & Company
Sometimes everything has to be enscribed across the heavens so you can find the one line already written inside you. Sometimes it takes a great sky to find that small, bright, and indescribable wedge of freedom in your own heart. David Whyte
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All you touch and all you see / is all your life will ever be
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There’s something about lightning we find so alluring, although it’s dangerous as heck! (Excellent picture choice to compliment your, yet again, entertaining poetry).
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thanks for the kind comment – we are often drawn to danger – but I don’t know why
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I love a good thunderstorm !
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makes for a cracking good time
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Yup- don’t move as fast as I once did.
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amen
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Very moving!
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thanks – I know you understand
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love it an the use of metaphors
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it is what we do, right? – I’m still learning about metaphors – each poem I read or write is like a new lesson
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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Reblogged this on Eagle Eye Network.
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thanks for sharing my poem
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Schaeffer captured ‘sound’ – you capture ‘words’. The end result for the both of you is unique. Wonderful.
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you are ever gracious
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Ah yes, between every blink of the eye, a vision, and within it a metaphor, a poem . . . Love it!
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much appreciated
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Paul, Thanks for reblogging this one! It’s fabulous–and yes, I feel it in my body, too.
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it’s just so frustrating
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Yes, it is. LIke having to make a life after we’ve already made a life–or thought we did.
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