
“Pine Trees and Snow” by Joy Nichols
(After Wordsworth’s “Splendour in the Grass”)
spring delayed
suits my mood
not yet ready
to take on
renewal
too old
too depleted
to face
starting over
but not even
stubborn old men
can intimidate time
spring will come
change the winter
to water
send it running
down cheeks
of my mountain
swelling streams
of my years
adding rush
to the rapids
of rivers
en route to
oblivious seas
an unstoppable flow
under force of
ambivalent gravity
pulling on me
taking with it
the stones
of my yesterdays
life as I lived it
my season
of splendor
at one with
immaculate
pine scented snow
Splendid my friend 🙂 I can smell that sweet scent of snow 🙂
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I’m glad it worked for you, cynthia
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wonderfully done 🙂
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much appreciated
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There is promise in the air. Uplifting poem, Paul
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many thanks, mike
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Very nice!
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thanks kindly
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Never too old to taste the renewal of a honeyed Spring one more time. Harsh winters graying my days are to be endured at times. I yearn to celebrate the cycle of the sun’s return and walk without looking down in fear of slipping on icy pathways. 🙂
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I find the winter invigorating
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It can be for me also, especially in my younger years when I could enjoy winter activities. I did visit the mountains this winter and that was definitely invigorating and uplifting.
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Seems as tho we are always grieving what is passing, and feel ill`prepared for what is coming . . . Not your last nail in winter’s coffin, I’d suspect . . .
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likely the last in new Hampshire…
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True awesomeness!
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I’m happy that you enjoyed it
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This leaves me wondering…and grateful for your wintery perspective on life.
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here’s something special about these snow covered new hampshire landscapes
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WOW WOW WOW (repeated once or twice)–amazingly good, and speaks to my mood.
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you have me doing a jig (in my head, of course)
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A mental jig is as beneficial as a physical one, I’ve no doubt.
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I’ve forgotten–may I reblog this, your, fine work?
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By all means, my friend
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Wow! It’s beautiful, creating an amazing world in front of me!😊
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thank you most sincerely
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Beautiful and wistful poetry.
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many thanks
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
MOST SPLENDIFEROUSLY POSTED!!!
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much appreciated
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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love this… the structure like tears falling down your face…. poignant and thought-provoking
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thank you most sincerely for your kind words
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Winter feels that way to this ancient mariner. Seems dead, and you wonder about you. Spring comes, everything starts growing, and you get the hint.
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nicely put
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Nice one Paul!
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thanks kindly, ginger
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